High School Cheer For My School.. What Do You Think?

[Mindi Keyser]

Ok, so this is a cheer that I put together for my high school team.. I'm open to opinions and suggestions.

Scott High School, is back once again, we'll fight for the title, we'll never give in.

You've seen us before
But never quite like this
We're back
We're better
Second best? Ha! Never!

We're stronger than ever
We've got something to prove
The black and gold are coming after you.

So step to the back
Get out of our way
We are the Skyhawks
And we'll blow you away!

We're out for the title and you're in for defeat!
So step aside, cuz’ youve just been beat! Scott!!



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[cheerforeverever]

It's a good start! Here's a few things to consider when editing:
-flow between verses (it's choppy here and there, making it difficult to say from the diaphragm during transitions from one verse to the next). If you rearrange it a bit, different verses go together easier and are clearer to shout out.
-repetition of certain words/phrases ( "back once again" "we're back" "so step back" "step aside" "we'll fight for the title" "we're out for the title")

For example, this is just a quick edit of the verse flow and using synonyms or replacing things that sounded similar:

Scott (x) High School,
is here once again,
we'll fight for the crown,
no we won't give in.

Cause you've seen us before
but never like this
One heart, One team,
One title in the mix.

No doubt
we're better,
Second best? Ha! Never!
S-K-Y (x) Hawks
(x) Forever

In the sky (x) that's us,
yeah your time is through.
The black and gold
We're coming after you.

So, move aside,
you're in for defeat!
Remember the name
cuz’ you've just been beat!
(x) Scott!!


(Just an example of how one version of editing could be done.....there's really unlimited possibilities for what you do with it concerning the verses,etc.)

Hope the constructive criticism made sense and helps in the future.

 

[Mindi Keyser]

Thank you for your suggestions


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